remenber our small writing project ("cute" assignment, eh?).
Topic: (any/ my) "PET"
Style: any of the three suggested/already taught:
Recount, or descriptive, or report.
Due date: FRIDAY, Oct.11th, 2014 (tx, Priscillia, class 9D,
for being the 1st to do on Oct. 10th, 2014)
Please write a 100-word story/description.
Check spelling/use of
vocabulary/ (some grammar) with your MS WORD.
But if you prefer to have your voice recorded, instead,
send me to UGET1st[at]gmail.com. Or send via my Facebook.
account UGET1st[at]gmail.com. Length: 100words/ around 1minute..
THX
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I don’t have any pet ,but if I had a pet, it would be a dog. I like dog because I think they are cute, they can be our friend , always there for us and they also can help us keep our home safe. The type dog which I maybe will take to be my pet is Great Pyrenees dog. I actually like pet, I often ask my family to have a dog or maybe other pet, but they said if we had pet it’s quite hard to teach them where they have to sleep, eat, drink, etc. so until now I don’t have any pet. So that’s all thanks for you’re time to read this. –Priscillia.C -9D-30-
Thanks, Priscillia (9D), you're the 1st. Where are the OTHERS? Phew.
I'll extend to tomorrow, Oct. 10th, then. "Great Pyrenees dog?" You meant like this?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Pyrenees
Pic of Great Pyrenees
Cool!
When I was 7 years old,my family and I went to a fish store.My father bought a very big and beautiful fish ,that fish had a bright red color and a long body.The owner said to me that this fish called “AROWANA”. Someday,the “Arowana” jumped through a hole beside my aquarium ,This hole had about the same size with the “Arowana”.This fish was trap and couldn’t move his body for about two days but still alive.The next day,my neighbor saved the fish,but unfortunately the fish already died.About two months later,my father bought an “Arowana” again,I thought that this fish would survive for along time.But…a few months later,the Arowana’s body turned a bit blue and his eyeball became white.That day,we realized that the Arowana had a disease and blind.My father bought a liquid medicine and poured it into the water inside the aquarium.But even my father always gave the medicine,the fish couldn’t survive and died one week later.That’s all about my story..thank you. –Cindy.L 9D/12-
You're welcome sir,yeah they looked like that haha :D -priscillia-9D-30
Two years ago I got my first dog. It was a Maltese dog from my uncle. We named it Chloe. Chloe stayed in my uncle's apartment. Every weekend my sister and I stayed there. Chloe slept in bed with my sister, uncle and me. Chloe was a cute dog. She was smart too. She loves to cuddle with me and my sister. But we couldn't keep Chloe any longer because of some reason. Then I don't have pet anymore. Me and my sister always ask our parents to have a dog again, but they don't want , they said it's smelly, noisy, etc.. That's all, thanks. -Gabriella Pekerti 9D/17-
I have a dog in my house. She is type of Shih Tzu dog. Her name is Twitty. She has black, brown, and white color at her fur and her hair is very short because she cut its hair in the barber pet around last week. Her height is around 25 cm and her weight is around 5 kilogram. She has a big ear and she has a small eyes. Her eyes color is brown (every dogs eyes color is brown). She is a little lazy dog, you can see it from the size of her body if you meet her (very fat). That’s a little things about my pet… Thank You. -Jocelyn 9D/20-
I have a pet. My pets are rabbits and I have pair of its. They have a soft fur and a brown eyes and also long ears. They likes eat carrot and vegetables awesome my rabbits can eat five times in a day so that they fast growing. How, they have been able to jump a round. Make me hard to catch them. Every time I like to play with my rabbit and sometimes I feed the rabbits and also combing their fur. Maybe next time I decide to buy a mini dog like cihuahua. That is all about my rabbits and thank you.-vincent/9D/36-
I have pets, they live in a small pond in my house. They breathe with their gills. Do you know what are my pets?? yes, they're fish. I have many fish. And all of them have different color, red, orange
, white, and black. They are all healthy, i guess, and also don't have any single scratch on their skin. They eat once a day, in the morning. And i have to clean up the pond once a month because it's dirty all the time. That's all about my pet. Thank you... -ValerieVivian 9D/34-
i once had a dog named homer,he was 2 months old . a dachshund with brown fur and green eyes. he was a really really cute puppy. i only had him for about a week. he died because of drowning. i have this huge/deep pond, he used to chill near the pond,and one day when no one was looking.He jump to the pond and few hours later my dad found him dead.that's all about my story. - Madeline 9D/22-
True friend
I had a dog once. His name is Tiger and he was the type of Red Poddle, but now he has gone. He has gone not because he died or because of accident, but because my grandma gave its to other people. She said it was hard to take care of him. But before my grandma gave him, i already have had much times with him. I played with him, fed him everyday, train him to be a good boy, and much more. I trained him how to pee or poop in the bathroom, trained him to go upstairs and downstairs, trained him how to treat guest politely etc. We put the dog in the cage while we slept. But when he woke up in the middle of the night, he always barked loudly because i knew he felt lonely. Because of his bark, my family couldn't sleep well and decided to give Tiger to other people. After he left, i felt lonely, i didn't have a friend to play anymore. I wish Tiger were in here, so i could feel happier everyday... That's all about my experience of having a pet. Sheila B-9D/31
I have a pet dog. Its name is louie. Cool name, right? The inspiration of getting this name was from the king of France. I named my dog by myself. I have had this dog since it was a puppy. The puppy was given to me from my father’s friend. I don’t know what type of my dog’s breed but I think it looks like Romanian Mioritic Shepherd Dog. This is the link from wikipedia : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Romanian_Mioritic_Shepherd_Dog. my dog has a long white fur, average body, the fur sometimes covers its eyes so that I sometimes can’t see its own eyes. My dog is male. It doesn’t like cats. If it sees a cat, it always runs after the cat.i love my dog very much –Bryan Julian-9D-7-
7 years ago, i been given from my cousin 2 dogs, we named blacky and yomi, the type dog is pom they looked cute and friendly they also could help us to keep our home. blacky and yomi always played with me and my little bro,my big bro scared with dog :D but my big bro love them he always gave blacky and yomi foods.my mom and my dad didin't like blacky and yomi at home so they brought blacky and yomi to puncak. we rarely went to puncak and then yomi died because she sick now blacky still live but he very thin because no one gave he foods :'(. i think that's all,, thank you :)
7 years ago, i been given from my cousin 2 dogs, we named blacky and yomi, the type dog is pom they looked cute and friendly they also could help us to keep our home. blacky and yomi always played with me and my little bro,my big bro scared with dog :D but my big bro love them he always gave blacky and yomi foods.my mom and my dad didin't like blacky and yomi at home so they brought blacky and yomi to puncak. we rarely went to puncak and then yomi died because she sick now blacky still live but he very thin because no one gave he foods :'(. i think that's all,, thank you :)-Sicilia.P -9D/32-
4 years ago, I went to Bogor for school trip. We studied about plants, but forget about that, the fun part is when we are being asked to catch a fish with our bare hands. I’ve tried so many times and give up and taught that I won’t bring any fish home, but one of my friend gave me a fish that she catch. I felt really happy that day and never let my fish go. I kept my eyes on the fish, that makes my friends say that I’m too over protective at it, well I didn’t care about what they say and keep my eyes on my fish so my fish won’t die because the bus shake so much, and what I did give me a fine result, because my friend’s fish died and mine not, it made me feel proud of myself. But the day of happiness won’t last long. Unfortunately my cousin ate my fish when I’m away. That’s it about my story. –Tiffara Assafita 9D/33-
3 years ago i have my first turtle, i have a pairs of it the name was beni and cirby but last year the turtles death because eaten by rat. and 2 weeks after my turtles death i bought the new one turtles the name was dave and sherrly i didn't know the type of my turtles.but i think anything type of my turtle it"s very cute,because they can choose the food that they eat. usually they want some vegetable. the color of my turtle same with the other turtle green. and they so afraid to stranger i think that"s all about my pet thank you for read it -melvina -9d -30
I really want to have a pet. Because if i had a pet i wouldn't get bored anymore. If i can have a pet, i want have a dog. I want have a dog because i think dog is a good pet and pet can help our home safe from thieves. I want to give the dog's name is Cody and i want the type of my dog is mini pom. And my family support me about my decision. But, I am actually afraid of dog. I afraid of dog because i fear in the dog bite. I think that's all thanks for read it. -Aurellya 9D/5-
My Rabbit
Two years ago, I got my first pet. It was a cute rabbit. I gave her name Carly. My father bought it for me as my birthday present. I was very very happy. She had red eyes, she had small legs, long ears and white fur. She ate a lot of vegetables,such as carrots, cabbages, and corns. She also had special food. Everyone called it pellet. Because she ate a lot of things, so she become fatter fatter and fatter each day. But, one day, she refused to eat anything that i give to her. It made me confuse. And unfortunately, she died two weeks later because of sick. It made me really sad. It's all about my first pet. Thank you.
Fiona 9D
Three years ago, my father bought two black tip sharks. They were babies when we bought them, they only can live in sea water so my father changed the water in the pool almost like sea water. They are unique because they never stop swim. Every shark ate one until three small fish every three days. One year later, one of them died because ate too much and jumped out from the pool. Now, the other shark still alive. His length about 1 meter. He eats 10 small fish every three days and he is so aggressive because if you forget to fed him, he will rampage in the pool. That's all about my pet, thank you. -Angelica A/9D/3-
I have 2 kinds of pet in my house. There are dogs and fishes. I've got 2 dogs. One of them is a ShihTzu who has white hairy fur and the other one is a chihuahua who has brown and white short fur.My Chihuahua is a little bit more energetic then my ShihTzu.They always bark when someone come home. I also have 6 fishes. Their color are orange and white.★ Thanks for reading ★
-Christian 9D / 11 -
I have a dog. I got the dog 4 years ago when it was still a baby. I got it from my aunt. When it was a baby she was so cute, and now it is still cute. It is a female dog. I don't know what kind of dog that I have. Her fur is black and brown and white. She has a long tail, her weight is about 7 kg and it's a medium sized dog. She have 2 medium sized eyes and 2 long eyebrows. That's all about my dog. (Jeremy E. (9D/19)
I don’t have any pets and I’ve never had one. There’re some reasons why I don’t have any pet ,first , I’m kinda lazy to look after for it , for example , I have to feed them on time , or I have to clean its cage routinely. Second , I think my parents have the same thought like me . I bet they don’t agree if I have pets . But if I have to choose what kind of pet I would like to have , I’d choose dog. Because I think dogs are the friendliest , smartest , cutest , and the most loyal pets of all. Finally , for my opinion , I think it’s good to have pets but if you’re lazy like me , better not to have any.
-Fransiska V.K. 9D/16-
10 years ago, I got my first pet,it was a fish. It was a Louhan fish, my fish had got white color for the body and its head color is vermilion. I really liked my fish, so I fed my fish everyday. Until one day my sister fed my fish with a whole pack of pellets, so the aquarium was full with pellets. Soon, the water in aquarium turned into blue water and my fish died. I felt very sad because my lovely fish died. From that time until now I do not have any pet, although I want to buy fish as pet.That's all, thank you.
Mikhael 9D/26
I have two pets, first is a fish. My fish is girl and her colour is orange. She is small and cute. I really love her very much because everytime I see her, she can makes me more relax after school. Not only that but also I have a dog. My dog is boy so his name is boy. He is very loyal and he always gives me some "welcome barking" everyday after school or course and he always follows me wherever I go if he wants to eat, sleep, or maybe when he wants to pee! Hahaha, but he is very wonderful
Marshella 9d-24
it's almost late, but i think I'm in the right time to type my story about my pet several years ago. Actually this story about my father and the rabbits (my pet). This story start when I was 5 years old.
When I was 4 years old. I had a pet. It was a rabbit, I didn’t give a name to my rabbit because I didn’t have any idea to give a name to female rabbit. First time I wanted to name it Rabbit-a (I just thought, when I was 4 years old. I’m not creative enough to do that), I tried Henry (then I relies that a male’s name), then I named it with my brother name. then I realize again my brother name is too hideous even for a rabbit.
It was started when my dad ordered me to put my rabbit to some sacks. Then I had a conversation with my father.
My dad:”Son, now put your rabbit in the sack.”
Me:”Why do I have to listen to you?”
My dad:”Just do it! I’ll give an extra money for this week.”
Me:”Extra for this month or nothing?”
My dad:”FINE!”
Me:”Btw what are doing dad? What tricks are you playing today?(My father was a magician). Last time you broke dinner table, tv, washing machine, and what now?
My dad:”Simple, I just want to make your rabbit disappear.”
(The truth is last time he had disappear my neighbor’s cat, then we have to repay for it A.K.A penalty. Why my dad such a failure magician?)
My dad:”In count of 3, it will be disappeared!”
(1…2…3… puff) the rabbit disappeared! And my money disappeared too, because the rabbit ran away and never came back home, so I bought a fish. If my father did another trick to my fish, probably nothing disappeared(because he is failure)-read the full version from my own book-Chenzio 9D/9
2 years ago, my dad bought me a fish, it was a gold fish. he bought a dozen of it. My brother really liked the fish, but i don't really like them because i thought they are boring. So my brother fed them everyday. He really liked them, but then, my gold fish died one by one, i was a little bit sad because of that, and so was my brother. About 4 months after that,I wanted to have a dog, but my parents didn't agree.they thought that i wouldn't take care of the dog,just like what i did to my goldfish. So since then, i haven't had any pet. So that's all and thank you
-Francisco Bryant 9D/15
I don't have or had any pet, but if i had to choose a pet, it would be a dog. I chose dog because i think they are different from any other pet, dogs can be trained, dogs also can be our friend if we were alone and many other things that dogs can do. The type of dog I would have is probably Siberian Husky because i think they look cool. I have ask my parents to have a dog, but they said if i had a dog, there will be no one to take care for the dog. That's all and thank you. -Nicholas 9d/27-
I don't have any pet, if i had to choose a pet, i choose dog. Because i think dogs can be our friend. We can play with them. They can learn about Us, they knew what we want. I want to play with dog everyday, but i ask my mom to bought the dog. My mom said no one can take care for the dog. I think that true, but i hope when i become adult, i want to buy dog. Thanks. -Calvin.T 9D/8-
Well if i can buy a pet i want to buy a dog, a golden retriver one because this dog is really cute. There's a pro and con about a dog. The potive is dog can relive our stress from our busy day. But the negative thing is how can we treat the them,their food,and many more. Well if you really love a dog i think you can treat you dog well. I'm sure someday i will get my own dog. -Christabel.C 9D/10
A few years ago, me and my sister visited my mother's friend's house. She had 2 dogs, shih tzu dog and pomeranian dog. The pomeranian one named Mochi and the shih tzu called Keyla. Keyla had white fur and Mochi had brown fur. Both of them were girls. The dogs were so cute. They barked, played and ran all the time. Even when me and my sister chatted, the dogs ran all around us to make we played with them. The dogs were very active but Mochi was calmer and thinner than Keyla. They were very very very very very adorable. But it was a long time ago. I don;t know what happened with them now. But my mother's friend always posts photos of the dogs in her social media so I think they are just fine. I can't wait to see them again. Hopefully soon. That's all from me, thank you :) -Vici 9D 35_
I like dogs.. the reason is simple, dog is a loyal animal and they can be a good listener too when we need a friend to understand about our feelings.. but there is a reason why i can't keep a dog.. it's because my dad don't like dogs.. he says that dog is difficult to treat all the treatment we need to give is just a waste of money.... well, when i think about it again, my dad is right.. it just wasting money.. maybe dog is not my destiny :D
that's all, thank you.. and i want to say sorry for my late.. i just can't find your blog in the other day.. -Ellen 9D/13-
I'm sorry for my late, Sir (:
I don’t have pets. Because my family don’t like it. They say that taking to the pet is very hard, like taking care of a newborn baby. And I should clean their pups if they defecate. And they are noisy and smelly, too. They also say that no one want to taking care of it if I go to school or somewhere. But if they allowed me to taking care for a pet, I would choose Toy Poodle breed. I think, they are so cute to be alive! It must be a girl, and I can imagine my Toy Poodle dog with hazel eyes and light brown fur. It must be really cute . I will give the name of it “Caramel”. Thanks (:
if i were a supergirl or boy i would just live like a normal person but of course, i would help people who are in need. I also would like to join a company that saves the world.I would like to fly as high as i could and maybe i wouldn't come back. I would act like spiderman that lives a normal life but also helps another person.
if i were a super girl or boy i would like to help people who are in trouble.I also would like to join the avengers.I also would like to ask ironman's signature because i'm a big fan of ironman. i also would like to fly high in the sky
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