After the GCR video on Present Perfect,
Kahoot! & the moodle homework
ALL about present perfect tense HAS/ HAVE (not) Verb-3 (see also irregular verbs on page 92),
Here’s the chance to write a brief/ short writing on:
1. what HAS your mom DONE for you?
2. what HAVE NOT you DONE for your mom?
Write around 80–100 words (usually 7-8 sentences)
in 2 (TWO) paragraphs and
use the correct grammar. Present PERFECT tense.
Where to write? In this BLOG comments.
DO NOT FORGET to write your name.
Use your smpk2.bpkpenabur.sch.id account /gmail, so you can enter the COMMENT box.
Eg,
In the comment box:
Teguh Santoso/ 8C-no. 35
My mom is a housewife, but to me, she is my hero. Mom HAS raised me as a teenager FOR 14 years.
She HAS MADE the family share responsibilities,
like house chores. Sometimes I make my bed and take the laundry out.
However/ But I DON’T think I HAVE (NOT) DONE too much for her. I HAVE never COOKED her some soup or even boiled eggs. I HAVE NOT DONE all school homework so mom HAS SCOLDED me hundreds of times. I think I am going to make her some sunny-side-up this weekend.
Scoring criteria:
20% .... 80-100 words
70% ... Grammar (mostly Perfect Tense)
10% ... On time (punctuality)
By Tuesday, May 4, 2021.
81 comments:
My mom is a housewife, but she is a hero for me. My mom has raised me for almost 14 years. She has made my bed, and the house chores. But, someday I make my bed and turn the lights on.
But in my opinion, I have not done that much for my mom. I have never helped her clean the room or even swap the floor. I have not done all school and additional course homework so that my mom has scolded me thousands and thousands of times. I think I am going to help her to do the house chores while my housekeeper left Jakarta.
Name: Nicolas Cheng/8C-No. 27
Great, Nic, you were the first! Almost perfect!
Jason Iskandar/ 8C No.13
My mom works for my family, but to me she is my saviour. My mom has raised and lived with me for 13 years.
She works hard just to make my family happy. She also bought the things I need if i earn it. For example, when I wanted to play games with my friends, she bought me a laptop just so I can have fun with my friends.
However, I feel like I have not worked hard studying or focusing at school properly, but she works to finance my school. From now on, I will try to study hard to make my mom proud of me.
Name : Justin Ricardo 8C/17
My mom is a housewife ,she’s my hero .She has been raising me for 14 years .She helps me with my homework and she cooks food for me. She also organizes the house for my family .She always tells me and my family to make our beds and she also told us to clean our dishes after we eat.
However I think I haven’t done too much for her. I haven’t done a lot for her. I have never cooked something for her .I made her mad a lot of times .So i need to help her more to make her happy.
Michellyn 8C/23
my mom work for my family, she is my hero. she has already raised me for 14 years. she always cook me some food, make my bed, etc. she makes the atmosphere less awkward. sometimes i make my bed and do house work.
but i think i haven't done to much for her. i'm to lazy to do something. she works to finance my school, but I sometimes don't pay attention to lessons. i have never helped her clean the room. i swear next time i have to help my mom do the house work, while my housekeeper leave my home.
Clarensia Eva / 8C-no. 06
Mom is my role model. She is very kind to everyone. My mom has raised me patiently since I was a baby. She has made me feel safe, because she always helps me every time I need her. She very loves me.
But I think, there are still not many things I have done for my mom. Actually, I want to give her a nice bag that I have seen at the mall. I haven’t given it because I haven’t had enough money. Also, I haven’t made strawberry cupcakes for her. I think I will make some cupcakes this Saturday.
Nicholas Oliever 8C 26
My Mom is a housewife. She quit from her job since the corona virus attack our country. Now, she always stay at home and have taken care her kids on home. My mom has taken care the house work. My mom also have helped me on my study and homework that I didn’t understand.
However, I think I have not done too much for her. I have never cooked her some simple food like instant noodle or even boiled eggs. I have not done all school homework so mom has scolded me hundreds of times. I often argue and disobey her words, and make her angry. I think I am going to study hard to make my mom happy.
Rachel Aurellia Gunawan 8C/29
My mom is my hero, but also my best friend. She has given birth to me. She has listened to all my complaints and worries. She has taken good care of me. Despite all the jobs that she has to do, she still spends time with me.
But I think I haven’t done so many things for my mom. I’m always too lazy to study and complain if my mom needs my help. But now I felt the adverse effect for not listening to my mom. I want to listen to her more because I know it’s good for me.
Clara Natasha/8C-no. 05
My mom is a housewife, but I think she's a really great women for me, or I just can say that she is a hero for me. My mom has raised me for 13 years. She has made me and my sister more discipline. She has made a breakfast, do the chores, and much more.
But still though, I think I haven't do much for her. When me and my sister haven't done the chores that she gived, or we haven't studied and just play around, she will yell at us. Sometimes, we had a little argument too. I have never cooked anything for her, or always help her do the chores, but this month I will promise to help her do the chores and make some cake on her birthday.
Name : James Darien Widyadi 8C/12
To me, my mom is more than just a parent. My mom has been the chef, the chauffeur, the tutor and the breadwinner. She's basically the modern day Wonder Woman. she may not be an angel but she has given me a wonderful life.
I know I haven't done much for her. That is something that I'm working on. I think I want to begin with cleaning my room everyday, and maybe I should start doing some house chores for her. And all this time I haven't taken her advice seriously, I think I should start listening to her advice because they have proven to be helpful.
Richie 8C/30
My mom is a housewife. She is a hero. She has loved me since she has given birth to me. She has take care of me gently and safely till now. She still loved me, even when i have a bad time. Even when she have a lot things to do, she still care about me and give me the first attention from her work.
But i think i haven't done so many things for my mom. I'm always too lazy to study and lazy to help my mom. She have a lot things to do, but i almost never help my mom. I think i want to help her because i know, It will be better for her and i can spend a time with my mom.
Amaris 8C/02
My mom is the best.She has given me more than i could think of.I couldn't imagine how she took care of 3 children.She is truly amazing.Even when she has a hard time, she still puts a smile on her face for us.
Even tho our mom does the most for us, we were always lazy when it comes to house work and chores. Yes,we ended up feeling guilty about it but we would mostly end up helping the store at home.I think we need to do more for our mom, her birthday is on 5th May which is tomorrow and we want to give the best presents for her on her special day.
My mom is a housewife, she is our hero. My mom has raised me for 14 years. She raised and took care of 4 children while doing her work. She's such an amazing person.
Me and my brothers didn't always helped my mom, we were lazy doing chores. I know I haven't done much for my mom, but I always tried to make her happy by making gifts for her during her birthday or mothers day. But I think it's not enough so I should started to helped my mom do chores so she could rest from her work.
Verrell 8C/33
My mom is a housewife , and she is also my family's hero. She has raised and took care of me and my siblings , while also doing her work and being busy. She is truly amazing for being able to do this.
But, I think I haven't done enough for her. I was always lazy when she asked me to do chores and other work. I often argue with her , and disobey her because of my stubbornness. She has done so many things for me , yet I haven't done much for my mom. From now on, I am going to start helping her even more and spend more time with her.
Karyn 8C/18
My mom is a housewife, she is my hero. Mom has raised me as a teenager for 14 years. She has given me warm home so I always comfortable to stay in my house. She has taught many things to me.
But, I think I have not done too much for her. I haven’t been able to make her happy, because sometimes I am lazy to do something. I want to be the best for her, I think I am going to help and listen to her more.
Elena 8C/10
My mom is an employee, she has been my role model since I was little. She has faced me and my sister's craziness for more than 17 years. At day, she works at her office until evening. Then she will wait for me to finish my study because I often oversleep.
However, I think I haven't done too much for her. I haven't studied seriously and haven't got any great scores. I think I will study harder from now on.
Declan 8C/08
My mom is a housewife, she feels more of a hero for me. She has raised and loved me for around 14 years. She has helped me and my family with our daily needs. Every once in a while, I help her out.
But, I think I haven't done much for her. I have never helped her doing the dishes. I haven't made her happy through studying and grades. I think I will study hard for this week.
Darren/8C/07
My mom works hard for my family. she is a hero to me. she has raised me for around 13 years. she halped me and my siblings to fill our needs. sometimes i also help her to clean the house and help her cook.
However I think I haven’t done too much for her. I haven’t done a lot for her.I made her mad a lot of times because of my grades .So i need to help her more to make her happy and study more.
Nicole/8C/28
My mom has done a lot for me. She has been my best friend since birth until now. She has raised me and my sister with love. She has listened to all my problems and cheered me up. Also, she has forgiven all my mistakes.
But, I haven't done much for her. I haven't been a good child for her, because I have made her mad a lot. I've been too lazy during quarantine and I know she doesn't like it. I hope I really can make her proud and happy. So I think I will study hard and listen to her words more later.
Louis 8C/21
My mom is a Housewife.She is a hero to me,she cheers me up when i have problems,she always cook me a delicious meal everyday.
However,i havent do much for her,sometimes i make her mad,i hope i can really make her proud,so i think i will study harder
My mom did everything to me and my sister. Even thought she never had a wish to have a child, she still loves us. She sacrafice a lot of money to give birth to me and my sister. She haved worked a lot to pay for the surgery and for out life necessities. She has always been my hero everyday of my life. She sometimes make me happy in my life and always forhive my mistakes. I was born by my mom.
My problem that i always make her angry because of my own desire. I should have realise that she have sacrifice a lot of things and i didn't sacrifice a lot for her. I cannot make my own desire now, i should study more and always obey my mom's words.
Madeline 8C/22
My mom is a housewife, but she's also my bestfriend. She has done a lot for me since birth. She has to quit her job only for taking care of me and my brother although she really love her job. She also helped me a lot with school work and more.
But, i haven't been a really good child. I made her mad a lot. I did not listen to her . I haven't really helped her with chores. I think i will listen to her and help her with chores more.
Name / class num : Jefienna Monique - 8C / 14
My mom is a housewife but, to me, she is my whole world. She has raised and help me through everything. Not only that, but she has also worked hard to educate and pay for my living.
While I never really appreciate and do the same for her. I have always disrespect her and made her mad countless time. I have not helped her enough. I have to help her more with cooking, cleaning, and accompany her just like she always accompanies me. So, i was thinking about cooking her a full meal tomorrow.
Natasha 25/8C
My mom is not only a best friend, she is my everything. She has raised and cared for me my whole life. She has always been there for me when I needed her the most.
On the other hand, I haven't done much for her I have always been a burden to her. I haven't done my best at helping her, and I haven't done my best at doing school works and studying when she has worked hard to pay for my education. From now on, I am going to be better, I'm going to help her with everything and I am going to be there for her just like she’s always been there for me.
My mom is a housewife but, she is Verry reliable i think. I feel Verry thank she already let me born and really greatfull because she hat raise my until now.
I think i had do the best i can for her but i think ITS not enough yet. My grade allways bad all the time. I think i should hone my skill and get a proper job so i can get many money to give to my Mon and my dad also.
Kioko 8C/20
My mom has done so much for me and my sister.she has sacrificed a lot for us.she raised me for 13 years.she always cooks for me and my sister and always takes care of me and my sister.even though she is busy she always makes time for us.she makes us make our bed and do the dishes.
However,i have not done much for her.i have not cooked for her.i have not help her very much and i have never bought her anything expensive.i want to buy her a dress with the money if been saving up.i think im gonna make a chocolate cake for my moms birthday,and spend more time with her
Alessandro 8C/01
I Love my mom she has done many thing for me. She has give her time for me. She has give his live to me too. She make me a breakfast for me. she has sacrificed her money for me too. But I haven't gave many thing for my mom. I haven't gave my best for my mom. I haven't cook for my mom (caused my mom not trust me). I haven't give home for my mom. I haven't gave all my trust for my mom.
Jevanslie Jo 8C/15
I Love my mom, she has done many things for me. She loves me to, she has give me a place to stay, she has give me food. When i was sick she take care off me.
But i haven't do the best for my mom. I can't make my mom happy. I make her mad every day. I haven't gave all my trust. But i love her, i tried my best for her.
I love my mom so much. My mom gave birth to me 14 years ago. She has been taking care of me until this second, and taught me many things. Even though she has to do all the housewife jobs in our home, she still makes time for me and my family.
But still, I think I haven’t shown enough appreciation for her. I don’t listen to her advice, and disobey her sometimes. I am going to thank her more often for everything that my mom has done for me and obey her more.
Yohebeth 8C/34
ESTHER 11/8C
My mom is a housewife. She hat raised me untill now. I have been born to this world thank to her hard work. She raised and take care of me since im still in her Tummy.
I havet do much for her. I haven't cook anything for her even just once. I haven't give any present to her even when her birthday. But i still love her and i want to do the best to make her proud later.
Thanks to ALL 27 (of 34) students who have already submitted your BRIEF composition/ writing this May 2021. Enjoy your LAST loooong weekend, everybody. 🙏♥️
*... who HAVE already SUBMITTED .... writing (SINCE this May 2021)
Kenneth 19/8C
I love my mom so much. She has done a lot for me.She is truly amazing for being able to do this.
I have not done that much for my mom. I don’t listen to her advice, and disobey her sometimes. So i need to help her more to make her happy.
... But, someday I (make) will make my bed and turn the lights on.
.... I have never helped her clean the room or even (swap) mop the floor. ...
I think I am going to help her to do the house chores (while my housekeeper left) when my housekeeper/maid leaves Jakarta.
SIR: Have you helped her?
Content: A
Grammar: B
On time: A
Jason Iskandar/ 8C No.13
Great!
.... For example, when I wanted to play games with my friends, she bought me a laptop just so I (can) could have fun with my friends.
However, I feel like I have not worked hard studying or focusing at school properly, ....
focus(ing) ON ...
Content: A
Grammar: A-
On time: A
Name : Justin Ricardo 8C/17
Coooool.
She (has been raising) has raisef me for 14 years . ....
.... she also (told) tells/ has told us many times to clean our dishes after we eat.
However I think I haven’t done too much for her. I haven’t done a lot for her. I have never cooked something for her .
I HAVE made her mad a lot of times .So i need to help her more to make her happy.
Note: Watch your full stop (titik) and no need to have space before it.
Content: A
Grammar: A-
On time: A
Clarensia Eva / 8C-no. 06
.... She (very) loves me very much.
But .... Also, I haven’t made strawberry cupcakes for her.
Also >>> (+) sentence.
Either (—) sentence.
(Also) I haven’t made ... for her, EITHER.
It’s ok. It’s for SMA level.
I think I will make some cupcakes this Saturday.
SIR: Have you made your mom the cupcakes YET?
Content: A
Grammar: A-
On time: A
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Michellyn 8C/23
my mom work for my family,
... she always cookS me some food,
makeS my bed, etc.
she makes the atmosphere less awkward.
SIR: Good vocabulary.
but i DON’T think i have(n't) done (to) too much for her. i'm (to) too lazy to do something. ...
i (swear) promised next time i have to help my mom do the house work, while my housekeeper leaveS my home.
SIR: Have you helped her?
Content: A
Grammar: B
On time: A
Nicholas Oliever 8C 26
Great!
She has quit from her job since the corona virus attackED our country. Now, she always stayS at home and (have) HAS taken care OF her kids on home. ...
My mom (also have) HAS also helped me on my study and homework that I (didn’t) do not understand.
However, I don’t think I have (not) done too much for her.
... I think I am going to study hard to make my mom happy.
SIR: Have you studied hard YET?
Content: A
Grammar: B
On time: A
Almost Perfect!
Rachel Aurellia Gunawan 8C/29
My mom is NOT ONLY my hero, but also my best friend. ....
Despite all the jobs that she has to do, she still spends time with me.
Great sentence pattern!
But I don’t think I have(n’t) done so many things for my mom. ...
But now I (felt) FEEL the adverse effectS for not listening to my mom.
Content: A
Grammar: A-
On time: A
Clara Natasha/8C-no. 05
... but I think she's a really great (women) woman for me, .... She has made me and my sister more disciplineD. She has made a breakfast, doNE the chores, ....
But still though, I don’t think I have(n't) doNE much for her. When me and my sister haven't done the chores that she (gived) gives, or we haven't studied and just playED around, she will yell at us. ... this month I will promise to help her do the chores and make some cake on her birthday.
SIR: Have you made it YET?
Cobtent: A
Grammar: B+
On time: A
Clara ...
CoNtent: A
Grammar: B+
On time: A
Perfect, James!
It’s just the vocabulary/ the term “chauffeur.” Better use “driver”. Chauffeur is a paid driver a family hires.
Content: A
Grammar: A
On time: A
My mom is a housewife , but she is my hero. She has been taking care of me since i was born , and i am 14 right now. She has cooked for me , helped me with a lot of stuff , and has helped me learn multiple things. Even tho she has her own stuff to do , she still manages to takecare of me,even tho i am kind of stubborn sometimes.
I havent really done anything big for my mom , or helped her regularly because sometimes i get lazy. We get into arguments about it but now i realize i should be helping her with stuff so i sometimes wash the dishes for her. Now i will try to cook more food for her.
Johanna 8C 16
Sebastian 8C/31
My mother is a housewife, but she is not just any housewife to me. She is a hero to me. For the past 14 years, she has always there to help me.
She has been working hard everyday to make my family happy. She does the laundry for us, cook us breakfast, etc. She's the best mom to me.
However, i haven't done much for my mother. I never cooked for her. I never done the laundry for her. Now, i want to make her proud, so she can be happy too.
Ballyan fokta 8c/3
my mother is a worker and also a housewife. now i want to talk about emotions because now is a covid pandemic. so emotions are very changing now. what i see now is my mother has more emotions than other mothers, i compare this from mother my friend .but i can't give good emotion to my mother while my friend can give
good emotions to his mother. So from that comparison I want to give better emotions to my parents.
Tristan 8C/32
My mom is a housewife and a caterer. She works alone alongside with my father and my nannies. I usually help her around the kitchen. I respect her hard work and the sacrifices she has made for me and my siblings.
But, I still haven't done much for her. Me and my mother have different morals and although I respect them, she doesn't! I do appreciate her hard work, but I can't seem to strike a conversation with her. I hope this changes soon and I hope we're able to improve our relationship.
Almost Perfect!
Content: A
Grammar: A-
On time : C+
Anonymous
June 6, 2021 at 11:45 PM
*Even thoUGH * she has her own stuff to do , she still manages to take care of me, *even tho* i am kind of stubborn sometimes.
...
Johanna 8C 16
Content: A
Grammar: A
On time: C+
Content: A-
Grammar: B- (haven’T DONE,
haven’t cookED...
Ontime: A- (the first composition on time)
Splendid!
Content; A
Grammar: A
On time: A-
So sweet of you.
I haven’T HELPED her.
Have you finally made a choco cake?
Content: A
Gramar: A-
On time: A
Amburadul grammar nya!!
PERFECT !!
She has giveN her liFe ...
But I haven’t giveN. I haven’t COOKED
etc.
Content: A-
Grammar: C+
On time : A-
Blogs:
I haven’T DONE
I haven’t giveN
CONTENT; A-
Grammar: B
On time: A-
Join remedial on Tuesday.
READ the examples. Use has/have +NOT +Verb3.
Content: D
Grammar: B
On time; C+
Ok.
For the past 14years, she has always BEEN there....
I HAVE never cooked.
I HAVE never done
Content: A
Grammar:B+
On time: C+
Too short. Remedial on
Blogs. Same topic.
Content: C
Grammar:B
On time: A
Remedial BLOGS on this Tuesday.
Even though she HAS never had...
She haS worked
She sometimes makeS
always forgiveS
have realiseD that she HAS sacrificed
Cpntent: B-
Grammar: C
On time: A
she really loveS her job
Wish to see you use MORE has NOT + Verb3
Content: A-
Grammar A-
On time: A
Perfect!
Content/ Grammar/ On time: A
HEY! Where are the PRESENT PERFECT?
Join remedial this TUESDAY on this BLOGS.
She always cooks me
I haven’t DONE
Content: B (too short!)
Grammar: C+
On time:! A
She has raised and HELPED me
I have always disrespected
Have you COOKED her a full meal yet?
Content: A
Grammar: B+
On time: A
Perfect, Verrell.
A!!
Okay.
I always FEEL comfortable
A!!
Perfect A. Yay
Great!
Perfect. A!!
Btw, have you studies hard yet?
Yes! B+
She halped >>> has helped ?
to fulfill
Perfect!! A!!
I should start to HELP my mom
Coool composition. A-!! Great
Touching! Have you all given her present yet?
A!! Great!
Louis 8C/21 Remedial
My mom is a housewife,but to me, she is my hero.my Mom HAS raised me for 14 years long
But I think I HAVEn't DONE too much for her. I HAVE never help her washing dishes,mop the floor.Sometimes i forgot to make my homework,now i want to make her proud and try not to make her angry anymore
Ballyan fokta/3/8C
my mom is a worker and housewife .she has raised me and educated me for 14 years .many things she has given to me like money,patience,and another.when i have thought about this i very sad because i haven't give what she like .So for now i want tobe a good boy
I love my mom so much. She has done a lot for me. She has make me food, make my bed and many more. She is truly amazing for being able to do this. She has raised me with love.
I have not done that much for my mom. I don’t listen to her advice, and disobey her sometimes. So i need to help her more to make her happy. i have not tried my best for her and i want to study harder to make her happier.
Louis 8C/21 Remedial
My mom is a housewife,but to me, she is my hero.my Mom HAS raised me for 14 years long,she cooks me delicous meal everyday.She helps me study
But I think I HAVEn't DONE too much for her. I HAVE never help her washing dishes,mop the floor.Sometimes i forgot to make my homework,now i want to make her proud,try not to make her angry anymore,and try study harder
Mikhael Koty 8C 24
My mom is a Mandarin Teacher. She has raised me and Educated me for over 14 years now. Shes not just my mother but to me shes my hero. But, in my mind i havent done many things to help her in past and now i only have helped her washing the dishes, mop the floor but i also have made many mistakes which ended up in me getting scolded so many times due to many things. I think i need to do much more for my mom.
Alessandro Owen Sebastian - 8C/01
I Love my mom, she has done many thing for me. She has given her time for me. She has given his live to me too. She has made a breakfast for me. she has sacrificed her money for me too. But I haven't given many thing for my mom. I haven't given my best for my mom. I haven't cooked for my mom (caused my mom not trust me). I haven't given home for my mom. I haven't given all my trust for my mom.
REMEDIAL BLOGS:
My mom did everything to me and my sister. Even thought she never wish to have a child, but she still loves us. She sacrifice a lot of money to give birth to me and my sister. She has worked a lot to pay for the surgery and for our life necessities. She has always been my hero everyday of my life. She sometimes makes me happy in my life and always forgives my mistakes. I was born by my mom.
My problem that i always make her angry because of my own desire. I should have realise that she has sacrifice a lot of things and i didn't sacrifice a lot for her. I cannot make my own desire now, i should have study more and always obey my mom's words.
Content: B
Grammar: B
On time: A
She HAS takeN care of me
She still careS about
Great improvement! Yes.
She HAS Sacrificed
Wonderful, Alessandro. BETTER improvement than the 1st draft.
Alessandro Owen Sebastian - 8C/01
I Love my mom, she has done many thingS for me. She has given her time for me. She has given his live to me too. She has made a breakfast for me. she has sacrificed her money for me too. But I haven't given many thingS for my mom. I haven't given my best for my mom. I haven't cooked for my mom (caused my mom DOES not trust me). I haven't given home for my mom. I haven't given all my trust for my mom.
Have helped her
washING the dishes,
MOPPING the floor ...
GREAT.
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