Deadline: March 23rd, 2020, 3pm.
Enjoy your mid-term holidays. See you next Thursday.
Write TWO 60-word paragraphs by
retelling and describing this pic.
1. (60 words) What is happening in the picture? Describe.
Use present continuous & has/have+ V3 (perfect tense).
Comment: Pls REWRITE in your own REPLY box the correct one. I've given two examples in RONALD(?) & Carlson's BOXes. Ronald seemed to be the 1st post-er.
Eg., In the picture, there ARE 6 boys--five ARE LIFTING a boy, Joseph, on the wall magz board. Joseph HAS done .... (still present tense (perfect), right? The five friends HAVE just MADE fun of him. .....
2. (60 words) Next, retell what do you think happened/was going on that November in class 8B.
Write the TWO paragraphs in the COMMENT box, like what you've once done before.
Please write your NAME.
Comment: Most of you have done it correctly. Just use PAST tense(s).
61 comments:
Write your two-paragraph writing here. Don't forget to write your name. Thanks
(Sir) Teguh
Natasha ct/8b/19
Topic 1 :
Maybe this happened last October? I forgot, but it must have been around last year.At that time, we were presenting about SMPK 2, UWC, and dream schools, haha I haven't forgotten about that day until now. Before the lesson sir teguh, the boys used their bulletin boards as Joseph's seat and were lifted up by other boys.
Topic 2 :
In November there was a very chaotic incident. Before Pak Teguh's class, on Wednesday at ten past ten, the boys on our class were playing around. Reyes and William are boxing or do something (?) Which causes vicka bottles to break. Even though vicka bottles are plastic and are quite strong. Suddenly sir teguh entered and asked what happened just now?
Topic 1:
Maybe its happened last november? I didn't forgot that time.We were presenting our bulletin board about SMPK2,UWC,and our dream school.After the english in that time we use joseph and the bulletin board like a magic carpet in Alladin. We play as joseph sit above the board and we play as magic carpet. that is so fun but dangerous.
Topic 2 :
In november i forgot what happen at that month. But i remember one accident that make sir Teguh being angry. At the break time, Reyes and Neilwin play in teh class. Which cause Vickas bottle break and made sir teguh angry to Reyes and Neilwin.
Topic 1 :
Maybe its happened last november? I didn't forgot that time.We were presenting our bulletin board about SMPK2,UWC,and our dream school.After the english in that time we use joseph and the bulletin board like a magic carpet in Alladin. We play as joseph sit above the board and we play as magic carpet. that is so fun but dangerous.
Topic 2 :
In november i forgot what happen at that month. But i remember one accident that make sir Teguh being angry. At the break time, Reyes and Neilwin play in teh class. Which cause Vickas bottle break and made sir teguh angry to Reyes and Neilwin.
William wijaya 27/8B
March 19, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Topic 1.
In that picture, we have known that Joseph has taken an english bulletin or project.Before Sir Teguh came, they have made an English poster look like carpet of Alladin as filmed in Alladin and carried Joseph so he can fly. Sir Teguh came shocked and they ran away.Sir teguh is taking a picture of them and has saved the photo until now.
Topic 2.
there has been a misunderstanding .Before Sir Teguh came to class, the boys were playing around where Nelwin accidentally broke Vicka’s bottle. When Sir Teguh came, he got angry. Nelwin had to pay Vicka bottle to change her broken bottle .Even though vicka bottle are plastic and are quite strong but it fall from twenty centimeters thats why Vicka bottle was broken.
Samantha 8B/22
TOPIC 1
I think it happened last october? my group were getting ready to presenting about smpk 2,UWC, and our dream school. the thing is, i saw joseph and the other boys were playing aladin flying carpet using their bulletin board. when sir teguh entered the clas, sir teguh was suprised when he caught them playing while he's not there. sir teguh said "don't go anywhere, i have to took your photo with that pose first".
TOPIC 2
last november? i don't think i can remember that long, but I remember one thing. it was a one fine day, we were just finished our breaktime activities and heading to our class. when i open the door i saw the boys were playing around as like always so i don't really mind them. when sir teguh entered the class neilwin and reyes were playing (somekinds like fighting) and suddenly neilwin pushed reyes to vicka's desk and dropped her water bottle and accidently break it. that accident really make sir teguh mad.
hanna 11/8b
Eunike S. L. 8B/8
Topic 1
Based on the picture, I can see that Neilwin, Darren, Ronald, Vincent, and Sean are carrying Joseph on a blue wall magazine board in the front of the classroom. They’ve been doing this for about five minutes until Sir Teguh comes to the classroom, takes a picture of them, and sends it to our homeroom teachers, Mr. Olop and Ms. Airis.
Topic 2
I don’t have a good memory, but I think Sir Teguh and Mr. Olop scolded the boys in the picture for their bad behavior that November. Based on my English notebook, class 8B was learning the past passive voice with Sir Teguh. We were also learning from page 32 of our New Challenges textbook about home remedies, such as chicken soup and honey.
Natania Agnes C 8B /18
Topic 1 :
Maybe it is happened last november? I almost forgot that time. When that incident happened, we were still in the corner class on the 3rd floor. At the time, we were presenting about SMPK 2, UWC, and dream schools. before Mr.teguh entered the class, boys in grade 8B were very noisy and the boys lifting Joseph using the presentation board. After that Mr. Teguh very angry and called Pak olop & Bu Airis.
Topic 2:
According to me, in november in class Mr.teguh the occurrence of broken bottles. Vicka bottles are broken down by Reyes and Neilwin. Before that incident, Vicka left the classroom. After the break, it is class time Mr. Teguh who teach us English lessons suddenly the vicka bottle fell right then Mr. Firmly entered the class. So reyes and Neilwin get punished.
Darren Christopher 8B/7
Topic 1
Based on the picture that sir Teguh posted, i see that a group of boys(neilwin,sean,ronald,vincent,darren)are carrying joseph with a big blue board that have been used for english poster.After around five minutes, sir Teguh comes to the classroom and takes a picture of us and left.And then sends the picture to our homeroom teachers which are Mister Olop and Miss Airis.
Topic 2
I don't really remember what happened in november.But i think that after Sir Teguh left, i left(Darren) and they still carrying Joseph. So Sir Frans went in the classroom and saw then carrying Joseph.So they got scolded.If i remember correctly,Sir Teguh was teaching UWC,then maybe some passive voice.But i do know that we went to Grand Zuri in November.
Great, guys! Nice writing, Samantha. So far, 7 students have published the writing.
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Teguh/ sir
topic 1
i dont remember what month it is happened bit i remember it is happened last year in semester 1.at that time before mr teguh's lesson the boys are using the bulletin board as a magic carpet. joseph sit above the bulletin board and at that time we were going to present about uwc,smpk 2,and our dream school and mr teguh has took a several picture of them.
topic 2
i think it is happened before mr teguh's lesson we have finished our breaktime and the boys were playing around they were running and punching and causing vicka's bottle to break and the water is everywhere when sir teguhcome to the class sir teguh was angry to them.the boys get a punishment and had to buy a new bottle for vicka
gracya 8b/10
TOPIC 1:
Maybe this happened last November? I didn’t really know when that happened. All I know is that it happened last year. If I’m not wrong, my friends and I have just finished our presentation about UWC, our school, and dream school. But before that, the boys were playing with the bulletin board. They put Joseph on top and act as if Joseph was flying with the magic carpet. Then, they got caught by Mr.Teguh and they got punished.
TOPIC 2 :
I think this happened last November. The whole class was so loud and the boys are role-playing as Aladdin and the bulletin board as the magic carpet. To be honest, I didn’t know what happened at first. But, my deskmate told me that 2 of the boys broke a water bottle. Guess what? They got caught by Mr.Teguh. Things went really awkward when suddenly teachers appeared in front of our class. In the end, the class went quiet and the 2 boys got punished.
Callysta 8b/3
topic 1
Bassed on the picture, Sean, Darren,Neilwin,Ronald,Vincent are carrying Joseph with blue board. The board has been used for Sir Teguh classes. And then Sir Teguh took a picture of them and send it to Sir Olop and Miss Airis,
Topic 2
I don't really remember but, i think Neilwin and Reyes were playing around they table and then, they were running and punching and causing Vicka's bottle and the water mess. When Sir Teguh come, he was angry and give punushment to the boys and told them to replace Vicka's bottle, but Vicka's did not want and refused the money
Judith 8b/16
Cathalia Irena 8B/5
Topic 1
I don't remember what month this happened. But what I knew at that time was English. At that time they were playing. But when the lesson hours Sir Teguh came. Then they were photographed and they were shocked. Then they were scolded because it was too dangerous. There Joseph climbed on a board for bulletin boarding then carried by his friends.
Topic 2
In November there was an incident during an English lesson. It happened the vicka bottle broke. The bottle broke because of Reyes with Neilwin. Broke because they were playing and then accidentally nudged so the bottle fell and then broke. The water is everywhere when sir teguh come to the class sir teguh was angry to them. The boys get a punishment.
Topic 1
Based on that picture, I can see that joseph is carrying by neilwin, darren,sean, ronald, and vincent as a magic carpet in aladdin with a blue board that sir teguh have been used for presentation. Sir teguh have taken a photo and he have gone to somewhere. And then sir Frans is coming to class and they are still playing.
Topic 2
I very remember what happened in November. My bottle have broken by reyes accidentally. But before the accident, i left the classroom. I have listened many story about the accident. Several boys are playing spraying water and punching. Unfortunately when they are playing my bottle step on by reyes and the water everywhere. And then sir teguh angry to them and they get a punishment and they buy a new bottle for me.
~Vicka 8B/25~
1, This thing happen last november i guess. I, Sean, Neilwin, Darren, Jospeh ,and others we were playing some stupid things. But we have fun, those pitcure make me remember all of what happened before. This thing make me laugh so hard.
2, This happend in November, Sir teguh came to our class in 5 minutes. After break time we sat and saw Reyes, Neilwin, and Tristan were playing infront of Vicka's desk. And Vicka's bottle was nudged, so they must compensesion the bottle. They were called by mam Catherine.
Topic 1
In the picture, me and neilwin, darrem, sean, ronald are carrying joseph in an infraboard. We were trying to recreate the scene from aladdin. Mr teguh took a photo of the incident and went out. Then mr Frans came in and got mad at us for playing something so dangerous. Mr frans then told Mr Olop, our homeroom teacher, about what happened that day during english class.
Topic 2
In November, i remember Neilwin and Reyes playing something violent and accidentally breaking Vicka's bottle. Mr teguh got angry and told the boys to replace Vicka's bottle. The boys agreed and decided to split the price of a replacement bottle, even though Vicka kept telling them that she was okay with it and they didnt need to pay.
~Vincent 8B/26~
Topic 1
I don't really remember when it happened,maybe last semester?at that turn of the lesson,sir teguh hasn't come to class 8b to start English lesson.the boys takes advantage of spare time to play.the boys carrying Joseph using the presentation board at the front door of the classroom until sir teguh comes.sir teguh suprised and told them to stay,take photo of them and save the picture.
Topic 2
I just remember a little.sir teguh hasn't come to class to start the lesson.neilwin and Reyes were having a fight,because neilwin spread water into reyes,Reyes mad and pushed neilwin into a wall,neilwin pushed reyes and accidentally Reyes stepped on a Vicka bottle and Made vicka's bottle break.they got punished by sir Olop and they have to replace Vicka bottle with the new one.
Chika 8b/6
Topic 1:
I don't exactly remember when this happened, but I remember we were doing this before the English lesson started. My friends and I were using a big blue poster board as a magic carpet, and we put Joseph on top of the Board. Sir Tegu came in as we were doing that, so we got scolded and he took a picture of us. This was a very funny experience.
Topic 2:
I don't really remember what happened in November, but I think some people broke Vicka's bottle that month. So, Reyes and Neilwin were fighting because Neilwin spilled some water on Reyes, and they accidentally stepped on Vicka's Bottle. They felt very sorry, so they bought Vicka a brand new bottle even though Vicka didn't want one. After this day they seldom do anything stupid in class.
- Sean Patrick G | 8B - 23
Name : Henri 8b 12
1.A boy who is wearing an orange batik named Joseph is being held by almost all of the boys with a board, its color is blue. He is being held by 5 boys spreading around the board. The other boys are cheering for him. The board has been used for a wall magazine, so it has some articles on top of it.
2. When the fifth period started, Sir Teguh hadn't arrived in class. Neilwin and Reyes were playing around by Neilwin spraying water at Reyes. Reyes got a little bit too excited and they fight but they knocked over Vicka's bottle and Reyes stepped on it. It caused a commotion and Sir Teguh came into class. In the end, Neilwin and Reyes bought Vicka a new bottle, but the next day Vicka came back with the same bottle.
Beatrice 8B/2
1. I think that this incident occur on November 2019. Ronald, Neilwin, Darren, Vincent, and Sean were playing and used a wall magazine to play with. On top of the wall magazine, there's Joseph. What I remembered from that day is it was really a chaos. Everybody was screaming, except for some of the girls whom talking to theirself.
2. On Friday morning, we, class 8B just finished our first recess. Before Sir Teguh came to our class, the boys were playing, and it ended with that incident. When sir Teguh saw that the boys were carrying Joseph, he decided to take a picture. Then,Sir Teguh told the class to sit down. And that's the end of the incident.
1.I dont really remember when this magic carpet happened. I believe it was last year. I think the big blue bulletin or the magic carpet were me,vincent,and carlson project. I think they used our bulletin because it was the biggest of all. Joseph was carried with the magic carpet by boys around the magic carpet. It was very funny.
2. Before sir Teguh class, Reyes and Neilwin were playing around and accidently broke vika's water bottle because Reyes stepped on it. It was said that Reyes play fight with Neilwin because he sprayed water at Reyes. Sir Teguh had not arrived in class that time. So when sir Teguh came in they got punished for breaking vika's bottle. I dont really know if Reyes and Neilwin actually bought Vicka a new bottle but what i know is Vika came with the same bottle the next day.
Matthew 8b/17
WILLY/ 8b/27...
[20/03, 15:13] what actually happened last November was when the recess bell rang we entered the classroom. Tristan poured a little water on the table, then Neilwin splashed the water on the reyes face, they then pushed each other and accidentally reyes stepped on the Vicka bottle, because of that Vicka bottle broke
[20/03, 15:13] What happened last November was Joseph riding a magic carpet raised by some people and singing a whole new world song, the carpet is a wall magazine for English lessons that is adding uwc, junior high school and dream school. After that, Pak T called Mr. Olop and Mrs. Airis.
Topic 1
In the picture, Vincent, neilwin, darren, sean and ronald are carrying me on an infraboard. We were trying to be aladdin. Mr teguh took a photo of the incident and went out. Then mr Frans came in and got mad at us for playing something so dangerous. Mr frans then told Mr Olop, our homeroom teacher, about what happened that day during english class.And we got punished by mr olop.
Topic 2
In November, i remember Neilwin and Reyes were fighting and accidentally break Vicka's bottle. Mr teguh got angry and told the boys to replace Vicka's bottle. The boys agreed and decided to split the price of a replacement bottle, even though Vicka kept telling them that she was okay with it and they didnt need to buy a new one
Topic 1
In the picture, Vincent, neilwin, darren, sean and ronald are carrying me on an infraboard. We were trying to be aladdin. Mr teguh took a photo of the incident and went out. Then mr Frans came in and got mad at us for playing something so dangerous. Mr frans then told Mr Olop, our homeroom teacher, about what happened that day during english class.And we got punished by mr olop.
Topic 2
In November, i remember Neilwin and Reyes were fighting and accidentally break Vicka's bottle. Mr teguh got angry and told the boys to replace Vicka's bottle. The boys agreed and decided to split the price of a replacement bottle, even though Vicka kept telling them that she was okay with it and they didnt need to buy a new one
joseph148b-
Topic 1
From that picture, we can see that some of the boys in that class are carrying Joseph with the blue infraboard that is used to do the last project. That blue infraboard is not used anymore and the boys are playing, carrying Joseph, and act like it is Aladdin's carpet. They have played until Mr. Teguh come and takes a picture of them.
Topic 2
I don't really remember what was happening on that time. If I'm not wrong, the boys in my class were playing with the blue infraboard. Some of the boys were carrying Joseph, who sat above the inraboard and they were swinging Joseph like Aladdin's carpet. And suddenly Mr. Teguh came, he took a picture of the boys, and reported them to our homeroom teacher.
Joyce E. G. - 8B / 15
Topic !
I saw they all my friend in my class.I was not really sure what is going on that day.Joseph was appointed by neilwin,darren,and ronald.They look really happy.This is happen when the class is changing to new subjects.Before the techer entering the class,student sometimes doing such a thing.They have used infraboard as a tool like they are lying on the bed.It's really funny.
Topic 2
I am not really sure whats going on November in 8B class.Before they are talking to each other,but suddenly some boys are coming towards them and appointed Joseph up by infraboard in the class.The paper is unused anymore.When Mr.Teguh was coming the childern were dismiss by them selves.
~Felicia.A.L 8B/9 ~
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Sir/ Teguh
Topic 1:
In the picture vincent,darren,sean,and ronald were carrying joseph on top of the infraboard. They act like it is a magic carpet.and sir frans came in and then told sir olop.not long after that sir teguh came in and took a photo of them.
Topic 2: it was november and i was playing with some water and splattered reyes. Reyes thought it was neilwin who splattered him. And then neilwin and reyes fought each other and suddenly reyes stepped on vicka’s bottle.
Neilwin 8B/20
Topic 1
In the picture Vincent,Ronald,Darren,Sean,and I were carrying Joseph on top of infraboard.We act like it a magic carpet.Went we carrying Joseph on top of infraboard sir Frans came in and told sir olop.After that sir teguh came in and took a photo of us
Topic 2
It was November ,after a break i,Jonathan,and Tristan were playing in class.Suddenly Tristan splattered water to Reyes. Reyes thought it was me who spattred him .And Reyes push me to the board and i push him again and Reyes stepped on vicka's bottle and broken
Ameris Suellen 8B/1
Topic 1
Based on the picture i can see that, Joseph is lying down on a blue wall magazine. That have carried by his friends namely Neilwin, Willy, Ronald, Darren, and Vincent infront of the classroom. After that with the same situation Mr. Teguh has entered into our classroom, took a picture of them and send it to our homeroom teacher.
Topic 2
At that time, mr. Teguh hasn't entered our classroom. So, Joseph, Neilwin, Darren, Willy, Sean, and Vincent, play "magic carpet" from aladdin. They are using a blue wall magazine as a carpet. And Joseph has carried by his friends with the carpet. 5 minutes later, Mr. Teguh has entered our classroom, he has shocked by their deed. Mr. Teguh asked them to smile, and took a picture of them. after that they returned to their seats, and class began.
Carlson 8b 4
Fron the picture, we know that Joseph, Neilwin, Sean, and Darren were playing with blue infra board that used to make the last project. The blue board was not used anymore. When sir teguh came to the class, they were playing the blue infraboard with Joseph on top of it, so sir teguh took picture of them.
Topic 2
I don’t really remember what was happening in the class. I am not wrong, Reyes and Neilwin were fighting and accidentally broke down Vicka’s water bottle. Sir teguh got anxious when say Vicka’s water bottle was broken by Reyes and neilwin. So Mr teguh told them to pay for Vicka’s water bottle.
Are you Ronald? Thanks for being the first to (have) post(ed).
... (see my notes above/ below here).
This thing HAS made me laugh so hard.
Eg., In the picture, there ARE 6 boys--five ARE LIFTING a boy, Joseph, on the wall magz board. Joseph HAS done .... >>> still present tense (perfect), right? <<<<
In the pucture, Joseph's five friends HAVE just MADE fun of him. .....
(sir) Teguh
So, pls REPLY next here .... near your own posting.
Thanks for being the last student to (have) post(ed) this. Apology for the troubles LOGGING in as ANONYMOUS (prove not being a robot & PUBLISH again).
(LOOK/ in the picture) ... and Darren ARE playing with blue infra board.
It seemS the board IS NOT used ....
Avoid/ hindari using PAST tenses. Just DESCRIBE what's on the picture (ZOOM, pls).
... (see my notes above/ below here).
Eg., In the picture, there ARE 6 boys--five ARE LIFTING a boy, Joseph, on the wall magz board. Joseph HAS done .... >>> still present tense (perfect), right? <<<<
In the pucture, Joseph's five friends HAVE just MADE fun of him. .....
(Sir) Teguh
(Sir) Teguh
Hi, Felicia, for
PART 2 try to write using PAST tense(s).
Eg., what WAS going on LAST November in 8B class. before they WERE talking to each other,but suddenly some boys CAME towards .... etc.
(Sir) Teguh
PART 1: See example/ note ABOVE (in Ronald's/ first poster's comment box).
PART 2: See below.
Reyes and William WERE boxing each other or doING something (?) Which causeD vicka'S bottles to break. .... etc. Please copy paste & correct next to this BOX as your own reply. Thanks!
KEEP UP the spirit, Natasha.
Eunike S. L. 8B/8 (RALAT)
Topic 1
According to the picture, Neilwin, Darren, Ronald, Vincent, and Sean are carrying Joseph on a blue wall magazine board inside the classroom. They’ve been doing this for about five minutes until Sir Teguh comes to the classroom, takes a picture of them, and sends it to our homeroom teachers, Mr. Olop and Ms. Airis.
Topic 2
I don’t have a good memory, but I think Sir Teguh and Mr. Olop scolded the boys in the picture because of their bad behavior that November. Based on my English notebook, class 8B was learning the past passive voice with Sir Teguh. We were also learning from page 32 of our New Challenges textbook about home remedies, such as chicken soup and honey.
(Sir) TeguH
Paragraph 1: Describe.
See mqy comment at the TOP.
Paragraph 2: ReTelling story.
Yes. Past Tenses.
and accidently BROKE it. That accident really MADE sir teguh mad.
(Sir) TeguH
Paragraph 1: Describe.
MOST are correct. Great.
mr teguh has TAKEN a picture
Paragraph 2: ReTelling story.
Yes. Past Tenses.
...
and the water WAS everywhere when sir teguh CAME ...
(Sir) TeguH
Paragraph 1: Describe.
See mqy comment at the TOP.
Paragraph 2: ReTelling story.
Yes. Past Tenses.
and saw THEM carrying Joseph. So they got scolded
Wow, long description and story.
(Sir) TeguH
Paragraph 1: Describe.
See my comment at the TOP.
Paragraph 2: ReTelling story.
Yes. Past Tenses, please.
The boys WERE role-playing/ WERE doing a role play....
GOOD way of retelling story:
Things went really awkward when ....
(Sir) TeguH
Paragraph 1: Describe. Present (perfect) tenses.
If you add "TOOK a pic and SENT it to ..."
So, see my new comment at the TOP.
Paragraph 2: ReTelling story.
Yes. Past Tenses, please.
When Mr Teguh CAME, ...
GOOD way of retelling story:
(Sir) TeguH
Paragraph 1: Describe what's in the picture. Do not use PAST tenses.
See my comment at the TOP.
Paragraph 2: ReTelling story.
Yes. Past Tenses, please.
GOOD way of retelling story:
The water WAS everywhere when sir teguh CAME ...
((mm, this seems to be the common mistake and correction, too. Mmm))
(Sir) TeguH
Paragraph 1: Describe what's in the picture. Do not use PAST tenses.
See my comment at the TOP.
Paragraph 2: ReTelling story.
Yes. Past Tenses, please.
I remember ... what ... etc. (past tenses).
Unfortunately, when they WERE playing, my bottle WAS STOMPED on by Reyes and the water WAS everywhere. And then sir teguh GOT angry ... etc. ((Pls continue revising/correcting the mistakes.))
GOOD way of retelling story:
(Sir) TeguH
Paragraph 1: Describe what's in the picture. Do not use PAST tenses.
See my comment at the TOP.
Paragraph 2: ReTelling story.
Yes. Past Tenses, please.
I remember Neilwin and Reyes WERE playing something violent and accidentally BROKE Vicka's bottle ....
Thanks, Eunike, aka. Yuke, aka. Raja Haji (First Kahoot) n Quakka/ PIN no. (last Kahoot) .... Yesss, only you who have submitted the correction, esp.rhe DESCRIPTION (no need for story-retelling in paragraph 1).
Happy weekend & happy E-Sunday SERVICE to each of you, guys.
(sir) Teguh
Hi Ameris, for parr 2 (RETELLING) use past tenses.
They were using a blue wall magazine as a carpet. And Joseph was carried by his friends with the "carpet". 5 minutes later, Mr. Teguh entered our classroom, he was shocked by their deed
Hi, Carlson, for part 1 just DESCRIBE what is on picture, so just use PRESENT tenseS.
In the picture, the boys ARE playing with blue infra board that HAS BEEN used to make the last project. The blue board is not used anymore.
Hi, Neilwin, for topic 2, RE-TELLING .... use past tenses.
And Reyes pushED me to the board and i pushED him again and Reyes stepped on vicka's bottle and broke IT.
Mmm, you wrote SPLATTERED, and Neilwin wrote one "SPATTERED." Wonder what it means.
For topic 1, JUST DESCRIBE what's on picture. No Mr T, no Mr Frans.
Great, Chika.
For topic 2,
Past Tenses.
Reyes WAS mad/ GOT mad
They HAD to replace ....
Good job for topic 2. Past Tenses.
However, for topic 1 (see the example), should have been: DEDCRIBE what is on photo.
In the photo, I can see some boys lifting ... It seems Joseph HAS done ... (still a present, a present perfect tense) etc.
Splendid! Almost perfect.
Topic 1: ... until Mr T comeS
or ...just describe the picture without mentioning me (I'm not in the photo anyway.)
Thx, Joseph.
Topic 1: No Mr Frans & Mr Olop im the picture, so no need to describe them.
Topic 2:
Use past tense all the time.
... accidentally broke ....
Sir/ Teguh
Did you mean
COMPARING (not "adding") ... for English lessons that ARE COMPARING (adding) uwc, junior high school and dream school.
TOPIC 1 is actually your good answer to TOPIC 2 for RETELLiNG the story (past tenses).
Topic 1 should be just DEDCRIBE what is on thr photo. That's it.
Great for topic 2.
For topic 1, just DESCRIBE.
It's like: Look! In the picture some boys ARE lifting .... etc. Present TENSES
Great for topic 2.
For topic 1, just DESCRIBE.
It's like: Look! In the picture some boys ARE lifting .... etc. Present TENSES
Perfect!! Thx, Henry.
Great for you for having read the exampes & instructions.
Sir/ Teguh
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